This is the kind of statement you should leave out your article.

Don’t fall to the standards of the typical online mgtow dude.

Put yourself in the shoes of a woman reading this line. How would it make you feel?

It’s not necessarily true either. Women can turn from emotionally wrecked man-haters into normal women with a bit of introspection and time.

The article has some important ideas so don’t ruin it by crossing the line like this.